When did you go, as the mirror lies, can't possibly be, a lady aged looking back at me?
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prompt .. one line only x x
A contest entry
- Throw me a line by Lavender Butterfly.
700 points, ended October 15, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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An original unique line as we all at one time or another have been fooled by our mirror...It never lies, just fools us...Reminds me of the "mirror mirror on the wall, who's the fairest one of all?" in one of the fairy tales...bravo for your imagination and write!
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thank you I like to think so. I loved your work.
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WOW! Short, strong, piercing....
Very VERY well done!
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Many thanks for your inspiring words
s Lib x x
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Wonderful
Very creative and so well said for one line. Best of luck in the contest.
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