Walking along a beach
sand everywhere
feeling the warm sand
between my toes.
The cool water
when the tides come in.
Bare feet is freedom
from restrictive shoes,
tight fitting socks,
and the stress of all
that comes with them.
In a list
A contest entry
- Prompt Contest 10 entries 30 to 40 words #9 by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended October 15, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Return of The Cricket by B Chandler.
900 points, ended October 27, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is simplicity at its best...
Cricket -
Wow! This is definately me! I'm always barefoot at home and I love to paddle or kick my shoes off when I can. It gives me a feeling of freedom and relaxation that is usually accompanied by favourite clothes and a long massage!!!!!Thank you for this stress busting write!
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this brings back so many memories. I so miss the sand of the beach. and we all have to take pleasure some where....and freedom is the best of all pleasures.
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Seems I'm always in bare feet ... means a lot of work keeping them smoothe but it's worth it
Great descriptive write. 
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Time to stand a stare. Nicely done.
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umm i just love walking the beaches with bare feet, feels great!!
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Barefeet and the sand seem to go together...very well done...nothing like the freedom of barefeet...thank you for entering!
mystic -
Great imagery! I could feet the water rushing between my toes. I love walking on the beach in the water. I love this simple, yet creative piece!
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