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See the sky, not just the stars.

A contest entry

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  • notorious gold member
    October 16, 2008
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    • Cup-a-Joe
      October 16, 2008
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      Jessica

      I am thrilled that you read my words. I appreciate it.
      Joe


  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 14, 2008

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    Much like the forest and the tree...we often get so focused we miss the big picture...thought provoking and creative...
    best to you!
    mystic


    • Cup-a-Joe
      October 15, 2008
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      Thanks for the nice comment, and the bronze!

      Joe


  • Grunts Girl silver member
    October 14, 2008
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    great line.
    so true!


  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    October 14, 2008

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    This poem says a lot in only 7 words. Such Beauty one may never see because their eyes are closed. Like love, they take beauty for granted rather than see it!
    Thuis deserves good if i were the judge!


    • Cup-a-Joe
      October 14, 2008
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      Dragonheart

      Thanks for reading,and leaving such nice words.
      Joe

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