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Never, Never.

Take a walk with me, Angel
Down to the place where we always meet
Just keep moving if I'm not there yet
Just let your heart lead your feet.

Every night
I'll be waiting beneath that tree
Where I carved our initials into the bark
"Together we'll always be"

Don't keep me waiting too long--
There's something I want to show!
Close your eyes, count to ten,
Listen to me speak and let yourself go...

We haven't
Known each other for that long,
But I know I love you--
please stop me if this is wrong

But I know what I want
And all I want is you
So please, please, baby
Tell me "I do"

Because I want you for life
Right by my side
I wanna take you to Greater Heights
I wanna take you on one hell of a ride.

So meet me by that tree
Where I carved our names
Please tell me 'yes'
And it'll always be this way

Now open your eyes
And gaze upon the stars
They're all shining for you, Angel
No matter how far.

It mirrors my love for you
The further we are
The stronger it burns
Just like those distant stars.

I'll never leave you
I want you with me forever
Because I love you so much
And I'll never walk away; never, never.

Author notes

This is for Natalie, of course. Inspired by a dream I had last night... I love you, Angel.

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  • YourAddictedLover
    October 16, 2008

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    Wow...

    Gods Jenna...your poems always seem to amaze me..lol. I love your poems they are very detailed and I can see that you work your heart out on them. *smiles happily* great work...keep it up!

  • Didnt It Rain
    October 15, 2008
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    Lucky girl indeed.
    I do, Jenna, I really really really really do.


  • Sir Squigglim
    October 14, 2008
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    awww

    kawaii


  • nerdgirl
    October 14, 2008

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    Lovely write.

    I felt the emotion in this piece.

    I loved the rhyme.

    Natalie is a very lucky girl.

    ♥ Harls ♥