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Some say
Seeming gay
Is like
A trip

To speak in the absence of spoken ideas
is to hear the obvious incongruent malform

There are no people here

There are no distinguishable cock sizes
There is but a common identity
Anarchistic
Without risk of gain
Without a name

A contest entry

Why didn't I use the word FAME?

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  • shecantstopfalling.
    October 18, 2008

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    righteo then...Its a bit weird but I like

    "To speak in the absence of spoken ideas
    is to hear the obvious incongruent malform"

    Thats good. Good luck

  • Judith Chandler
    October 14, 2008

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    The title is intriguing and the part about parts ("no distinguishable cock sizes) is VERY intriguing. It still is anarchistic, you're right about that.