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reaching the limit

everyone has their limits...

    he's a genius, I say
    that's what I always say
    easily impressed


I do unto others
  what others have done unto me
    karma?


  the night whispers solutions
into a tired ear
  it's not giving up
it's merely moving on

  a drunken kiss does not
    a relationship make

    he's intelligent
    a few quotes, allusions
    and I'm head over heels

I can chase
I can want
I can try
I can hope

  failure is the conflict of the mind
    the simplest of pleasures

  he's a lover
   
  not mine...

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  • Evinde
    July 8

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    I like thi poem because it sounds so unsure, have there and half shaken and unstable. I really like how it begins, forms and unfolds.


  • Deja Vu
    May 10
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    "failure is the conflict of the mind
    the simplest of pleasures

    he's a lover

    not mine..."

    My life story. I should get the "A drunken kiss does not a relationship make" tattooed on my forehead. It would be oh so fitting, or very beautiful at any rate.


  • Sean Ottoson
    February 27
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    nicely put.