You never know true pain until you watch someone you know suffer and can do nothing about it.
A contest entry
- Throw me a line by Lavender Butterfly.
700 points, ended October 15, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This left me with a lump in my throat a tear on my cheek and taking time to compose myself enough to leave a comment. Brilliant kindred spirit, you speak no truer word than this. Congratulations on your green trophy


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A truely hopeless feeling where both suffer greatly.

Best wishes in the contest.



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So very true. I have been in that situation before, and unable to ease their pain, or ultimately save their life. It's a place I'd choose never to go again, but will be forced to unfortunately.


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Wow yes that sure is a one liner no one can dispute! Such honesty here that can't be passed by!
Another for that book!!!!
All the best with this
gaylene


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Super Gold
That is so true.
Words for the wise.
joe

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