My life is nothing like yours
nor is it anything fucking more
Forever I've been falling away
unable to ricochet
Never to love another again
taken down by fucking vixens
hellbent on my annihilation
and thus there begins this
descending slide into provocation
So chosen one of twilight smile
take my life from volatile night
seize the hour and bring forth
the light
Pull me from freezing fires
Into my heart of desire, breathe
your life and I will so respire
give back all what your heart
hungers for, and fuck you raw
Never in a million years could
I hope to love like you, wrong
planet or something very screwed
such has been my dumb life true
A blooming flower taken by
destiny, robbed of all dignity
Oh if I could love again
I'd show you somebody so unlike
how people knew, somebody
fucking loving and new
If I could love again
There'd be no reason to cry
no cause to falsify
If I could love again
I'd give you my broken heart
To reawaken and repair its
shattered parts
And there upon your trust
evil desire kept inside will
kill you just, rip your heart
out to bleed for my savage lust
For I am death to hold
waiting for you to unfold, and
take you into my eclipse cold
Through window of darkness I'd
get you, innocent child star
my thirst on deaths avenue
And there my novice pretty one
weakened by my brutality won
I should devour you horrible
So gullible child of twilight
smile, heed here message under
my guise
For if I could love again
all above would be your life
to scar and mark, take you
into darkest night
If I could love again
there I'd become such a
fucking man demented
Author notes
He sees you and woos you, but what if his only desire is to kill you. Some men can never love proper because of past hurts, thus the stalker he becomes.
In a list
A contest entry
- -- Word Bank -- by Noir mariposa...x.
550 points, ended November 1, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Any thoughts I'll much appreciate
Comments
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thanx for reading. Preciate it!
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Wow, very strong feelings and very strong poem.
I agree, some guys are complete jerks. I had a stalker once... bloody creepy guy. the hilarious thing is now he's turned into a die-hard christian. *cough* twat *cough*
Good write,
thank you very much for entering
Claire x
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hmmm interesting feeling to this one. hurtful but so true,
hugs,
georgie,
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How painful and in distress the poet is,,you are very heartfelt by the poetry of your heart..the strong immages are here but with the complete pain and agony..touching poetry...
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i love this part:
So chosen one of twilight smile
take my life from volatile night
seize the hour and bring forth
the light, pull me from
freezing fires
i love the poem.
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wow...you're right some men can't love properly...
and the past...haunts
great write
And there upon your trust
evil desire kept inside will
kill you just, rip your heart
out to bleed for my savage lust
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