How can I say no to a forgotten angel like you who always stood beside me and never let me fall flat on my face even when I deserved it, and always loved me for who I am even when I didn't love myself enough to care about you or anyone else because I was so full of pride that nothing else mattered, not even you, my forgotten angel, can you forgive me?
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A contest entry
- One winner, two options, ten entries, go. by Chocoholic156.
500 points, ended October 19, 2008, 9 entries
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I felt as if you were jotting down a last minute speech that you were preparing for "this person". You were just talking, monologging, and not actually writing poetry.
Thank you for entering this contest and good luck.
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