Heart of the Moon
In the imminent failing light
I feel the coming night
Drawing near and soon
Awaiting the heart of the moon
Setting is the sun
And the day is done
But here I will stay
Within the wind I sway
A devoted vigil I keep
Not for spoils to reep
Only the gentle touch
Which I miss so very much
And the gleam deep in her eye
Shining bright in the sky
Starlit painted and drawn
Shunning the distant dawn
Reflected upon the surface
Is her beauty, and no less
A being far beyond me
For this, I can surely see
A love beyond life
Mending all pain and strife
Cleansed until its gone
I pray thee, don't move on
But she will not be bound
By a man upon the ground
The fact I fear and hate
A product of viscious fate
I do not despair
For she does care
A love so far
Past the nearest star
But still I reach
For your heart I beseech
Fending off this pending doom
Ever awaiting...
The heart of the moon
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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loved it hun. you have a ton of talent.
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I like this. I love the way you rhyme, definately do have some mad skills. Only lines I noticed that didn't rhyme where "Reflected upon the surface
Is her beauty, and no less", but I am not sure I can even figure out a word to rhyme those.
Great Write! -
RHYMMMEEEE.
As I will say time and again, Justin, I fuckin' envy your mad rhyming skrills. I'm also finding that I envy your ability to use "thee" and "thy" and all that other spiffy oldie lingo. 
I always end up fuggling it up somehow or another. Oh, well.
Even though the inspiration for this piece is devistatingly sad, I rather enjoyed it. Keep a strong heart, my dear, and you'll make it through these dark times.
♥
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