Let me see you cry, tonight
Let me see you die, tonight
Wake up, teary eyed, tonight
Bring truth unto the lies, tonight
Don't worry, friend, I'll be waiting pure
I want to see you when you're cured
I want to creep into your head
When all that's left is rot and dead
I'll make sure to crush that girl's skull
Make her pay for your downfall
Bash bone and cartilage in cement
Painting red the ice cold pavement
Don't worry, child, I'll be here
When everyone has disappeared
I want to make sure that its true
I'm holding tightly onto you
Let me see you die, tonight
So you won't have to cry, tonight
Won't wake up, teary eyed, tonight
Bring peace unto those sighs, tonight
And when it's morning, don't you cry
I'll rest my head on upon your thigh
I'll tell you it's gonna be all right
When that whore girl dies tonight
Author notes
Honestly, I think this is the most dark thing I've ever written. I left parts and pieces of it in my friends inbox to creep him out. I hope he talks to me in the morning. XD
I put part 1 because, depending on what happens, I might write more.
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This is quite a dark poem that you have written here indeed, it almost felt as lyrics actually.
Thank you for the entry!
Leander
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