When I walked passed the bar,all heads turned.
"did they hear my pussy talk?"
I grabbed a stool and ordered myself a martini.As I sat there sensuously tonguing my olives,I knew his eyes were on me.With my bare back exposed,I felt the heat from his body,I knew he had arrived.
"I know he heard my pussy talk.
He sat beside me and asked my name,(like he was really interested).
He undressed my barely dressed body with his eyes and licked his lips with such gratification.
He slowly reached over and laid his hand on mine and with the other,slowly ran his finger up my sp-sp-spine.
"did my pussy just stutter?"
I grabbed his hand and led him to the elevator.When the doors closed,his body covered me like a black diamond mink.Sucking my neck ever so gently and caressing my arms.He slowly knealed down and raised my dress,
he was suprised to see that my panties were nonexistant.
His hands rubbed my ass and thighs while eating my pussy,he flipped me over and licked the crack of my ass!
"my pussy was screaming!"
He bent me over from the waist down,my pussy pulsated awaiting his next move.
He stood up and unzipped his pants.He spread my ass with his big masculine hands and began to fuck the shit out of me.
"my pussy was speechless."
Our bodies had so much motion,so much rhythm,it almost seemed rehearsed.
I came and then he came,he held my waist so tight.
As I slowly turned around,our eyes met and at that moment,I realized that I
love this man as much as I did 20 years ago,
"and wifies pussy purrrrrred.
A contest entry
- Erotica Contest by Reanna Eryn.
475 points, ended March 24, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
did you realize they were a married couple role playing?
Comments
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LMAO! This is great! I love the story line
and imagery that you used in this one. I love
the way that you ended it. Wonderful and good luck to you in this contest! Thanks a lot for sharing it with us all here!
Jeremy0826
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sorry i'm so late with a response,but thank you so much for taking the time to read my poetry
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Wow this is so wonderful, you had me going for a minute, only God nos what I was thinking. I loved it! It was a pleasure to read.
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thanks for the comment
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Haha! Cute!
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thankyou
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CUTE!
Under the influence of alcohol, "tongues" will wag - won't they. LoL -Howard
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lol,thankyou
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Very sexy and sensual. Nice twist at the end bringing the tone back to love instead of lust.
My only crit would be "He slowly knealed down on his knees" is a bit redundant, the word "kneeled" already implies he is on his knees.
lovely write... alby
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hahaha Very, Very Good. A wonderful story of wonderful love. Best not let the kids see this.
Well Done
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The parts connected -- all of them -- intimate details vivid, passion building, the surprise ending makes it much more powerful, gives it a quality of perfection.
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This was a really good read! Very erotic and I like that
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Amazing!
I had no ides that these two were married when i was reading this! The last line was completely amazing to me. I dont know what it is about married people doing things that makes it even better but to me it does, its so much more sensual, and the part about 20 years ago i just loved that because it means that love can last. That makes me really happy. You did a wonderful job! Out of all the poems I could have randomly clicked on I'm glad I picked this one!
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thanks for that response.People need to realize marriage is a tricky situation,if you don't at least try to keep it live,it will truely die.
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you write amazingly
and clever too... with what you did with the sp-sp-spine
the guy had definitely read your [nether] lips and how she talks amazingly...she really do talk the talk
am talking nonsense... I'm just Wow and amazed here by your talent.
Anna Lee
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tehe i think thats funny
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omg that was hilarious
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