Sweet boy, I fell.
I learned to love,
the love that is most desired,
an open heart,
I gave to you
yet we have grown apart.
The world at your door, you ran
seeking opportunites that
no longer include me.
I understand.
With the heart of a child
I hope you find
everything you desire.
A contest entry
- The Selflessness of Love... Huge Points! Form Poems. by PerVirtuous.
3000 points, ended October 18, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I'm trying to find confidence in my writing, Opinions are more than welcome!
Comments
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Wonderful!
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well you wrote this very well. I can see you really tried hard to come across as the child you were writing about and I think you succeeded in doing just this. Good job
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