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Hand in Hand




Excuse me..
...have you looked for
...for you've confessed
...to have you kissed
...to have you embraces
...for remaing me myself
...to have you liked
...to exist.

I'm sad today.

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Prompt:
Option: 1) 30 words. Speak to me.
30 words

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  • Chocoholic156
    October 16, 2008
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    I have read this so many times and I don't know what to make of it. I don't know how you want this to be read and I can't understand what you are trying to convey. Like:

    Excuse me have you looked for
    Excuse me for you've confessed

    I just don't understand it. I'm sorry.