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fragmented soul


somewhere between
questions and answers
his name appeared

small words
spoke volumes,
collected trivia
amassed insight

poured belief
upon a soul
nurtured a heart
watched it renew

still worlds apart,
alike just the same









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5.) Write about the day you met/saw the person who changed it all.


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  • Hell In Harmony
    October 14, 2008

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    somewhere between
    questions and answers
    his name appeared

    great opening stanza

    still worlds apart,
    alike just the same


    good ending as well
    felt like a little punch was missing
    but still a good take on the prompt!


  • Cannonsfire
    October 13, 2008

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    Just smiles from me for this C


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    October 13, 2008
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    This is very very well written!! You truly did a very wonderful job!! I love it sis!!

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