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Mean/Tall/Lost/Point

I feel mean.
I feel TALL.

Each step brings me closer to another breath.

I fear it. So much, I inhale again.

What's this?
the floor.
You come soaring down.

I fear it. So much, I inhale again.

Why can't you breathe?
just hit her again.
You WILL feel better.

How can you be so high, when you seem so low?

I fear it. So much, I slit my wrist.
Just to prove I don't need her.

Author notes

I really don't know what to say.

Something I started. Something I feel that I cannot stop.

“You do anything long enough to escape the habit of living
until the escape becomes the habit.”- David Ryans

Here's my lullaby: Pray for rain, lose your name and watch all your dreams fall through...hush now, don't you cry...

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  • Wild-N-Wiccan
    November 20, 2008

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    Because I like spanish..

    Este Poema era fantasica. Puedo sentir la pena y sé que tengas en tu mente. Depresión es horrible pero puede eseñar nos cosas importantes sobre nosotros mismos.

    Tú puedes decirme cuando tengas problemas.

    Somos amigos y te quiero como uno....>.< Es una mentira, te quiero un poco más que eso.

    Besos!!!


  • Dirty and Broken
    October 16, 2008
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    i love the ending....wow, christopher...amazingnessocity!!!!!


    • backdrop.silhouette
      October 17, 2008
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      AH! It speaks!
      Anywho...how've you been?!? i feel as though you're breaking up with me...


  • Emm Jayy
    October 14, 2008
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    Something I started. Something I feel that I cannot stop.


    What does that mean?


    • backdrop.silhouette
      October 14, 2008
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      UNTIL i relized that something i didnt put in the actual lyrics...heh. myah bad. myah bad.

    • backdrop.silhouette
      October 14, 2008
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      that? that, is a stanza. You see, I added and bunch of incomplete sentences together to form one coherrent thought. AINT IT AMAZZAZING!?!?


  • Izu
    October 13, 2008

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    How can you be so high, when you seem so low?

    this line is a favorite of mine from this peice, it has meaning yet has none, has one, then has none.

    tres clappies because your simply dashing!

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