All i wanna know
Is what was going thru your head
When they found you
Lying on the floor dead
With your body turnung cold
To escape this life
And your furture being controlled
By this knife
Your blood flows
Freely from the fatal wound
And as your heartbeat dies
Your fate is doomed
A contest entry
- Goodbye Poetry by poppa.
14089 points, ended October 18, 2008, 57 entries
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beautiful
Ill tell you whats going through my head that this is a great write you have a beautiful way of expressing your feelings into your poems I look forward to your next write -
hey thanks
this poem was writen for my late boyfriend
he killed himself
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" Your blood flows
Freely from the fatal wound
And as your heartbeat dies
Your fate is doomed "
this part is brilliant.. its so raw and packed with emotion
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wonderful
oo...i like this alot....it's straight to the point....kool -
I love it!!!!
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