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Stilled Breath

Breath stilled in anticipation ... Silent touches , heavenly elations... So afraid to recieve ... So afraid to breath ... Not wanting to miss ... The feeling of bliss ...Waiting , breath  stilled in anticipation...Waiting...

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  • Chocoholic156
    October 16, 2008

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    I always forget to put this in the rules. I do not like this kind of poetry... minor here! umm.. yeah. Just to let you know, this will not win. sorry.