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.You Are Mine.

Dance my Angel of Dreams

while I rip you apart at the seams,

sew you up again,

pretend I am your friend.

 

 

 

Tear it stitch by stitch,

your heart is mine to unhitch,

I'll continue to pull you apart,

you'll never be able to restart.

 

 

 

Your life is mine to control,

even your heart and soul,

you will never be free,

give up...

forget it...

don't bother to believe...

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  • Pleasantly Insane
    October 28, 2009

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    Well

    Considering that you "don't know" haha. I think this is a very unique and wonderful piece of writing.
    "Tear it stitch by stitch,
    your heart is mine to unhitch," This is my favorite part. I relate to it in so many ways.
    Very very nicely written. Keep up the good work.


  • Dark Prince Chaos
    October 21, 2008

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    truly deadly i loved the work beautiful as art and as tanted as blood this was as a demons heart i loved every word