It was like awakening from a dream
But it felt like a flaming bullet to leave
I wish that I had kept my head
And had said what had to be said
They told me I had an easy task
To just go up to her and ask
But I was a coward
And afraid of such simple words
I thought that he was on my side
But he betrayed me and took her for a ride
He stole my love
And my chance for the back-breaking hug
But now I am shattered,an empty body
Because loving her became my only hobby
A contest entry
- All I Have/no trophy winners please. by piccola.
600 points, ended October 15, 2008, 12 entries
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Comments
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I really like that; "a back breaking hug" nice job here. Great story which I hope isn't true. Thank you for entering
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