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Disembowelment As Art

I am Hell

              personified

and fiery eyed devices

 commit my every wicked desire

when in cellular bleedings

I design you in complete

    annihilation.

 

You,

       see,

 and those of your page,

are wretched rodents

  dropping a

                  nti

                       co

                            agulant

 lullabies for manifestations

  of cock roach infestations

that congregate and procreate

to create

              a bed

 on which to rest your empty head.

 

Your pitiful lives beg my eyes

 for some sort of salvation

but my determination deters your imagination

from elation to

 a heaven mama

                 and papa

promised you.

 

Be good

  stand straight

live your life quick and clean.

 

But in the end

   the spoon I'll use to carve your soul

is both rusty

 and deliciously

                       slow.

 


 

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  • Bean Sidhe silver member
    October 14, 2008

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    This is the level of volatility that I was looking for. Exactly what I was after. Thank you for entering & good luck!


  • Harlequin Dance
    October 14, 2008

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    Dang the last stanza of this poem made me shiver. It's so creepy and sadistic. The whole poem is really good.