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A Fond Goodbye




Farewell, friend.


Through all my trials,
in bad and good,
you've stood beside me,
as a true friend would.


Farewell, old friend.


The adventures shared,
locked in my mind,
are fondest because,
you were so kind.


Farewell, true friend.


I ne'er forget
our best shared times;
we lived our lives
through prose and rhymes.


Farewell, my friend.





©2008
10-13-08

Author notes

Written for the contest: Goodbye Poetry by poppa
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2423987

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  • a humble servant
    October 21, 2008

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    wow, that was awesome, really really awesome.
    man, it brings tears to my eyes! it was quite powerful el, really good stuff!