go. .
You mean the world to me, and
I hate to think
I'd never hear from you,
or laugh with you again.
If you have no choice,
because you have no choice,
know there will always be
some girl
on the other side of your world
who misses the real you,
wishes you joy, treasures always, and perfect perfect peace.
Thrills and shivers, and more love than
your heart can hold, and would swim across the oceans
and bring you a cheese pizza,
if you asked me nicely. . .
You friendship is special
to me, the one person
who can have me smiling in seconds
flat.
Please don't go Poppa.
Your leaving would make me sad.
But I understand, and I wish
you all the best.
Author notes
I don't want your points.
Please don't go Poppa.
I know no other way to say it, than that.
Love,
jin
A contest entry
- Goodbye Poetry by poppa.
14089 points, ended October 18, 2008, 57 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Aw, this is so sweet
he is not leaving is he?
see what happens when you are away a couple of days!
I am sure he won't go anywhere now
hugs Moony
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Heartfelt and it reads like a note tucked
where one would find it during a mundane
day and reading it would spend the rest
of the day smiling, untouched by the hardships
of life. Blue
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Such a heartfelt way to show how much you care.It is always sad when someone leaves AP but sometimes they have to, only to return refreshed and ready to start again.I join with you in wishing Poppa the best in what ever he decides to do.Like you, I hope he changes his mind and decides to stay, Ros
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Aw. Here's a biiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiig hug for you jinny
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ahh sissy this is a wonderful poem to him.. I don't want him to go either. you've said it all.. sadness would be felt all around if he left. You know that.
kat
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still makes me very very sad. . :(
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Nice dedication Jin.
Mike
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Awww! This was such a lovely write..Beautiful and touching. I think Poppa got the message. Such a beautiful write.
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A lovely poem hun. Sometimes I guess people just need to move onto new things in their lives...
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