Your betrayal is still fresh,
And I cannot escape the pain.
It festers in my thoughts,
Like a splinter in my brain.
Torture comes at ever turn,
I cannot close my eyes,
For fear of seeing your dark face,
Or hearing honeyed lies.
Closer then the best of friends,
Thicker then two thieves.
Thought we'd love for all of time,
But in the end she leaves.
Wounded deep and bleeding fast,
These scars are just for you.
The only one I ever loved,
A girl I thought I knew.
A contest entry
- MUHAHAHAH!!!!!! by Dirty and Broken.
800 points, ended October 16, 2008, 35 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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That was beautiful!! I didn't connect the title with the poem while i was reading, and then the last two lines hit me, and it's just awesome. That's me though, I read the title without really reading it, then when it's over I go back and reread paying attention to what it's called. It really is brilliant.
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beautiful....
i absolutly love the last stanza, first two lines...
thank you very mcuh for entering -
Wow, I love this! It's a beautiful poem, I wish I could give you more than 3 applauds.
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Thank you for your kind words, it means a lot to me. I'm so glad you like my work.
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