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Echoes

Missing image

ALONE


surrounded by
 
ghosts of
 
Africa
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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  • individuality gold member
    June 2

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    a good poem, ah your homeland here speaks loud with so few words - all the ghosts that time has taken.


  • crivanea silver member
    October 29, 2008

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    ohhh!!!...first time i got a geographical llocation.. ghosts of africa?>..what r u refering to?..the natives?..the bareness of the desert? the lost strangers that are perhaps buried underneath the sand ..or the previous civilization forgotten by man? nice word chioce


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    October 15, 2008

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    I WAS GOING TO ENTER THIS BUT I COULDN'T THINK OF ANYTHING,
    GREAT WORDS PULL THE PICTURE TOGETHER PERFECTLY
    GREAT CREATIVE MIND
    WELL DONE MY FRIEND...