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Eulogy

For Kurt and Layne

You sat in your angry chair
making faces
a clown
for all to see your folly.

  Thank you.

A contest entry

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    October 13, 2008
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    short and to the point, I like it


  • movedon
    October 13, 2008
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    holy crap 14,000 pts? dang! rofl. short and sweet. love it, as always!

    myles


    • Apocalyptic Scarves
      October 13, 2008
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      yea i didnt write it for the contest, i thought of it in my head on the way home from work, i entered it as a prewrite to the contest after iw rote it because it kind of fit, being a eulogy and all