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Laughing Breeze

red leaves swirl around
the breeze gasping in laughter
speckle its pale moth

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  • Draig aine gold member
    November 21, 2008
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    thumbs up

    love the imagery the breeze gasping in laughter
    excellent

    • saddie23
      November 21, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you for the wonderful comment given to my poem. Saddie23


  • azure85 gold member
    October 26, 2008

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    red leaves swirl around
    the breeze gasping in laughter
    speckle its pale moth

    Delightful images of autumn, you use the senses well with the colors, feel of the breeze and sound of it. Thank you so much!

    • saddie23
      October 26, 2008
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      Thank you

      thank you for the comment given as well the applaudes too. Saddie23

  • x26ss
    October 13, 2008
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    excellent haiku, really quite nice

    • saddie23
      October 13, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you for the wonderful comment. Kendhal

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