(sounds better sung)
Take me or leave me.
Don't go only half way.
Don't you fool around with me anymore,
Or it's all over right now.
I could do better without you.
I could live longer without
You makiing me drown like this!
So take me or leave me.
I could make a decision for the both of us.
It could be made right here and right now.
So make a choice or I will,
I know you've been messing witih me behind my back.
I've you,
I've seen her,
I've been with you.
So just leave me and take her!!!
I will not let this pull me down,
It takes much more than a little
Boy like you can do!
So don't take me, I've leaving you!
A contest entry
- SO WHAT?! I don't want you tonight! by StarvingAuthor.
324 points, ended October 22, 2008, 7 entries
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i really like this and i think you'll do a great job in the contest! i think it sounds fine not sung :-) this was very strong! keep on writin'!
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