I know these eyes
I know this voice
I'm Pregnant and asleep
I only see a wedding band
And then there is a ring on me
I feel his breath as he whispers
"I need a place for her to rest,
You see she is 8 months pregnant,
And our house it is a mess.
Can I use a room, for an hour or two
She doesn't sleep now often
So can I lay her down?"
I feel my body being lifted
Higher from the ground
I know these arms
I know this feeling
The saftey of his touch
But this is just a dream
Even I know this much.
A contest entry
- Give me ur best!! by ProudMomma.
526 points, ended October 17, 2008, 50 entries
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