What kills the most,
while trying to maintain your reputation
when wounds are bleeding,
is to run against the stream of life -
a force neglectful of emotion
that leaves you hungry, weakened,
and kills your hope forever
to meet the one you love in absence
once more..
just once more before the end of the world.
Author notes
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$) Imagine you've drifted apart from someone you used to be very very close with. How do you feel? Write it for me!
2)Heartbreak
I'm a munchkin's apple pie yada dida oh-so-in-love-with-life!!
A contest entry
- Options! by Patched Up Ragdoll.
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I love your title, and I love the feelings you evoke in me- well done!
The end-of-the-world conundrum is also a hardhitting one. .
Yep, thank you so much for entering my contest and all the best!
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wooow. Excellent write!
thanks for entering and good luck! -
Oh, okay! Awesome write then! Good luck in the contest!
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This is all great and dandy, but which option did you choose?
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I just put the option in my AN!
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