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Poor Baby Girl.

Hide behind your mask,
secrets meant to last,
try to keep them out,
living life,
wretched with doubt,
try to run,
don't ever stop,
one more pill,
just one more pop.

Poor Baby Girl.

When Oh when will I learn,
it's just a touch of razorburn,
drip, drip, drop,
can't ever stop,
pain becomes too much for me,
burning,
now my eyes cant see,
blinded by the truth, so why,
why oh why do I cry,
for all the ones who left me here,
needles, broken glass, and beer,
heroin all over the place,
you look at me,
i'm a disgrace.

Poor Baby Girl.

Go ahead and hit me,
I know i'm bad,
beat me, bruise me,
dont look so sad,
your the one that made me,
so now you can destroy me,
brought into this world,
just so they could toy with me,
make my life a living hell,
break me down,
out of my shell,
killing my spirit,
breaking my dreams,
i'm dying for your pleasure it seems.

Poor Baby Girl.

The one who cries all alone,
who sits up,
when your not home,
who bleeds and bleeds,
on the bathroom floor,
clean it up,
there is no more,
no more blood to flow right through,
nothing left for you to do,
you did your job dont you see,
you were put on this earth to torture me,
you did so well im proud of you,
you never held back you filthy shrew,
im dead im gone,
dont worry now,
you wouldnt cry not anyhow,
dont ever worry im just a girl,
the one that you brought to this world,
a scared little girl hiding from the pain,
you broke the rules,
life's just a game.

...Poor Baby Girl...


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It's about me. So dont ask.

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  • in silver script
    November 18, 2008

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    ...wow....very strong poem here. I can't say I relate to it but I absolutely feel for those who can...thanks for entering!

  • ourlittleposse
    October 30, 2008
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    Awesome

    very well written, very amazing, I've been there you had me in a trance there for awhile good job

  • euphoricangel
    October 28, 2008
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    i like this a lot. this is amazing.


  • HisFavoriteMistake
    October 19, 2008
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    As always my love, sad and beautiful. thanks for sharing and lettin me in...il


  • Tyl3r
    October 18, 2008
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    Another crazy cool poem in a weird twisted sorta way.


  • XxemohatexX
    October 16, 2008
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    wow

    yah ive been in most of this and can relate to mosty of it i rleayu love it, it is great and it relay flows i dont knwo if you were goign for lyrics or not but eather way it would work i love to reald you work adn keep it up love the cutter emo poetry adn hope to read more work

  • SilentMoonlight
    October 15, 2008

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    Don't need to ask; I've been there.

    This brought back vivid memories that hurt as I'm sure anyone else who went through this will. Nice flow; a lot of pieces I've seen written like this are all over the place.

    Beautiful.

    Thanks for entering.


  • cbsbecm88
    October 15, 2008
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    this poem is beautiful and really touching and sad! good luck!


  • fairytalelovestory
    October 14, 2008
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    ty for entering good luck


  • xXundeadXx
    October 14, 2008
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    ...Savi

    Why do the ones we love the most torture us so? You are so sweet and so young you don't deserve this at all. Please tell me you wont try anything to hurt yourself. Look this was a really good poem but it scares the shit out of me. I love you Savi... Never forget...

    • SaviDropKick.Oi.
      October 14, 2008
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      Thanks so much Grady...I dont know why they do it. Maybe I do deserve it...I promise you, I wont do anything to hurt myself. Dont be scared...Love ya too.


  • CorpseCandy
    October 14, 2008

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    hey girl, miss you, this is a wonderful write keep it up. you are such a wonderful person with a beautiful heart. keep on keeping on

    love,
    crazyjake


  • X...
    October 13, 2008

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    im sorry savi...i think i know what this is about...this is a powerful poem with a fast paced and intricate rhythm bravi brava bravisima


  • MisguidedGhost
    October 13, 2008
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    This was very good...

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