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All in a Lifetime; Lived in a Week

She took her breath away,
She made her smile,
Like back when she was a little girl,
Destiny unclear forever,
Innocent like a flower.
For her girlfriend to hold,
Live from the stem,
Blooming and smiling,
Happily smiling.


She had made her mark,
Sending her the message over her phone,
She texts "i have to tell u somethin'"
Never would she have guessed,
Her friend was gay.


A new question came upon her,
She loved her somehow,
In the same way as she loved a boy?


Like a scar she wore the label the kids gave her,
But she still wore the smile as well; with her girl.

 

Until they found out.


Twilight dawned and twilight set,

Sleepless nights; forever nights;
Waiting for each other,
Throwing stones at her bedroom window,

Can't knock; the parents would hear.

 

But how...


How could this be wrong?

Author notes

~ Away
~ breath
~ Back
~ Destiny
~ forever
~ flower
~ Hold
~ live
~ mark
~ message
~ never
~ new
~ Question
~ same
~ Scar
~ smile
~ Twilight
~ Waiting
~ window
~ Wrong
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  • locked
    November 19, 2008

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    i love this one its amazing, i love the last part, "Twilight dawned and twilight set," that's paragraph is amazing, i love your words.


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    November 1, 2008

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    Very strong message put through this. I think my favourite line would be the last ones:

    "But how...
    How could this be wrong?"

    Nicely written. Sad, but awesome at the same time ^^
    Thank you for your entry

    Claire x


  • musik-freek
    October 17, 2008

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    This was a really sweet poem. I loved the title and the short lines. The meaning so simply put. Great work!


  • Galaxy2
    October 13, 2008

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    'Twilight dawned an twilight set
    Sleepless nights, forever nights
    Waiting for each other
    Throwing stones at her bedroom window'
    ....Wow...I love it...
    I'd be waiting for your stones hitting my bedroom window...
    I'm all alone in my room, honey...and I keep the door bolted from inside at night...
    You can jump easly through the window...
    Shall I wait tonight, cutie!
    Wet kisses...all over!
    Galaxy2