Painted red leaves litter the damp autumn ground,
Glossy, crimson, ever so smooth to touch.
This is where my soul grew up,
In the depths of the autumn glow.
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A contest entry
- Short poems about the Autumn Season by The Fun House.
950 points, ended November 2, 2008, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - AUTUMN! - what does it mean to you? by FallenSoul009.
900 points, ended November 15, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i love poems about Autumn , this was short, sweet, perfect ! great write
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what a beautiful picture you paint with the words. The imagery is lovely and created a wonderful picture in the mind of the reader. Beautifully done and well written. Good luck in the contests
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this is really good! i loved your detail and metaphors. the vocab and levels of this are so good for your age. you are an amazing writer. props 2 u!
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