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Like a Flower

Like a flower..
May my life be
Uncluttered, open,
Ready to hear from God.
With petals unfurled,
Pointing towards the sky,
Tell me why do the flowers
Show their exquisite beauty
In such an undemanding way?

Author notes

Inspired by the quote: "O God! the beauty of your art makes me speechless... Unknown"

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  • Shantti silver member
    May 3

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    Very peaceful. Beautiful imagery here. In answer to the question, beauty is supposed to be undemanding isn't it? Just a thought as I read this. But thought, flowers are so gorgous sometimes and just sit there being beautiful (oh what a life! )
    I love you beautiful spiritual piece here. It's like being in an open field of flowers
    Thank you


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    October 14, 2008

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    Yes..you are so true and so much wise bringing the depth and the beauty of HIS grace in the poetic form..I love it..thank you so much for entring my contest..well done.....

    • harriet567
      October 15, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you, PrabhuDayal, for your kind words of appreciation. God bless you, Harriet