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You Are My Rock

You break from the pain,
and I watch you.
You talk to me about it,
and I listen to you.
You cry on my shoulder,
and I hold you tight.

You watch me,
as I scream from the stress
You listen to me,
as I confide in you.
You hold me tight,
when I most need it.

I love you like a friend
A best friend,
A brother,
You are my rock;
My hope for the future.

Author notes

Another one for Dan.
He's not my best friend, he's so much more.
A brother.
My rock.

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  • SpoonsKill
    November 30, 2008
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    Very nice

    this is a nice poem lisa, you write so well