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Nights of the Gods

They told me, with hands of gold, "time to pray, to fast, to weep."

They closed my eyes with songs of peace, and bathed my hair in cups of myrrh.

I stood, a statue, devoured by their smiles; I stood, content in nakedness, clothed in perfumes and seasoned wines.

They took my wings of rust and lay them to sleep beneath the waves;
they stole my diseases, ate my famine.

I prayed, sung in silence.

Their clocks hung still, their books no pages.

A blanket of dust crowded their eyes with gray; The babes, draped with filaments of silk, were statues, held firmly by mothers with eyes sprinkled in diamonds.

The filth there stenches the finest of beasts; tiger, lions, alive with majesty, roam in horror's odors, moving restlessly in circles of gloom.

Their hands. Cloudless. Boundless.

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  • WerewolfLustz
    April 16

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    Wow I love it!!
    They took my wings of rust and lay them to sleep beneath the waves;
    they stole my diseases, ate my famine.


  • wuzisname
    January 31

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    Very elegant

    Written by the hand of a Goddess. I love the imagery you created in this write. I could see it as if i was there. I was mesmerized by your choice of words and the descriptions of your surroundings. Great write