What did I do wrong, and why am I myself
When everyone gets better and no one else needs help?
I often wondered, quietly, why I should feel this way
And sometimes even asked a foe to be there for the day.
Still nothing changed, and I gave up on living in this place
Now, even in my greatest failure, I fail to just erase.
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This shows your talent. Although I wonder if this poem is that length because you want it to be .. or you just can't think of moving on with it? I get the feeling it's the latter.
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A bit depressing!!!
It's good, I reckon you get the point accross anyway, you want to dissapear... Rogonziborrrrrr!!!! (In a nutshell) -
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An excellent write, been there, done that. Expressed very passionately for being so brief.
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