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A holy hand upon my face.
The warmth of sun that falls like grace.
A heart of joy from justification.
A stance of peace from Your salvation.

Who could ever give me such?
Infinite love like a gentle clutch,
Upon my soul, from here to the end.
A spiritual fracture brought to mend.

I was my past, You’re my future.
I was the wound, You’re the Suture.
Once empty cup, now filled with water.
An unloved child, loved by the Father.

You made me free of burning hell;
You make me weep, in spite of self.
You make me love what I’ve become,
You make me love Your holy Son.

I take Your hand, but not for me,
To place on another; make them free.
With Your grace, like the sun
Give me brothers, make us one.

Let them know Your justification,
Help them stand on Your salvation.
Grant me joy, give them such.
I want them to know Your gentle clutch.

© 10-13-08

Author notes

To respond to what the Lord has done, what has to give.

What delights Him best is to give self.

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  • Gulfbreeze
    October 25, 2008

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    Your poem is a blessing for all those who read it. Thank you for sharing, very well written and the message is inspiring.

  • heismysong silver member
    October 15, 2008
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    Have some points, too! LOL

  • Cinara
    October 14, 2008
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    This is absolutely lovely in thought and word

  • goalsv
    October 14, 2008

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    AMEN! A beautiful praise, so poetic with its flow that it inhances the meaning as it flows through your thoughts. Giving our whole self is all we have to give!


  • Janice M Pickett
    October 13, 2008

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    brilliant

    One of the best poems I have read in ages. This is indeed a wonderful poem in all senses of poetry.


  • OurGoldenYears Page gold member
    October 13, 2008

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    oh what a

    beautiful poem for your Lord, he works miracles and still has time for all else that can go wrong, lovely entry, good luck in her contest
    Linda


  • Samplette gold member
    October 13, 2008

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    This is really a beautiful write. Thank you for entering.
    Sam

  • Warrior of Peace
    October 13, 2008

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    Powerful

    It's very good poem. It speaks the powerful truth. He is our path and future. He is our light. You speak straight from The Lord.

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