I. Your the scarf around my lips.
(Woven of dreams and dandelion seeds.)
I'm sitting in a field made of daisies,
And I'm laying underneath a tree
Looking for a branch to climb.
The leaves are falling like I am for you;
And I'm looking for a smile to climb inside.
I use your words to sew my broken heart back together,
And I wipe away the sweat and blood with your
Tender finger prints.
The sun is fading into colors of the leaves,
And now I can't tell which is which anymore
because it's just one entity.
[Flash.]
II. It's night;
The moon's merged with street lights and stars
to light up the dirt road leading to your house.
We're in the back seat
And the windows are fogged up ;
Like my eyes are fogged up with visions of nostalgia
And things I can't forget.
"Your heart is beating.
Really fast.
Really, Really, fast."
I know. I feel it punching my ribcage.
I feel it fighting off the army of butterflies.
I feel it tearing itself apart.
I feel it singing lullabies and charms,
humming itself to sleep.
I feel it.
I hear it.
Just like I hear you breathing,
Laying on my chest,
With our arms tangled like our eyelashes stuck in
forever butterfly kisses.
Words are leaking through my thoughts
And slipping through my lips.
I'm lost, but I know right where I am,.
I'm looking at you and nothing else feels so perfect,
Nothing else makes me feel so infinite. So complete.
I hope you don't mind.
III. Touch my fingers;
Hold my hand;
And please, don't ever let go of my heart.
IV. I love you.
Author notes
It started with the inspiration of fall.
I love fall. I love fall so much. I just get a good feeling in the fall, and everything goes right. And it's just nice. Perfect weather.
Then I mixed my love of the fall for the love of my boyfriend.
And a scenerio from last night.
Him and I just laying in the back seat of my car.
Not a whole lot happened but we fogged up my windows. ahahah.
Good times, good times.
Life is great. <3
Please tell me what you think
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I love how it transitions from day to night, and then mentions all the little thoughts you had in-between. And yes, fall is a gorgeous time of year. I once thought summer was my favourite season, but this year has made me love fall. Anyhow, excellent poem.
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oh my goodness.
I love it!!!!!!!!!
"III. Touch my fingers;
Hold my hand;
And please, don't ever let go of my heart."
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how to describe it? it was hard for me to catch onto what was going on, with the numbers and the blank space, it was a lot to take in all at once. i love the simplicity of the last line.
IV. I love you.
beautiful, really. -
i liked this a lot! the romance was really there.
the actual set up was a little awkard, try maybe centering it, or taking away some of the blank space.
beautiful writing though.
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Thank you so much. (:
What was awkward about the set up?
Ooohhh. I don't like centering. o.o
And the blank space is there because it's my thought process; like there's just that emptiness for a subtle stop.
If that makes sense? haha.
But thanks so much.
<3
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