If there was a line that we
could draw between us here,
we'd be one person severed
no matter how near
by man's simple, limited vision
and existential fear.
Author notes
Inspiration: "Your Cloud," Tori Amos
A contest entry
- Contest- Symbiosis by g r e y i s m.
875 points, ended December 20, 2008, 19 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Well?
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Succinct
Simple and to the point. I like it. -
i really dig your style man. I may hit you up later with a proposition.
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Curiouser and curiouser.
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wow this is pretty good... good flow, sound, and it fits the song well.
nice one... thanks for entering.
Lea
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