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no one knows why

the thing that people don't understand,
is it's not about being thin,
it's about the voices in my head,
telling me eating is a sin,

don't you think i've tried to stop?,
i've tried so hard to break the chain,
but even though i try so hard,
it all ends up in vain,

some days it's about weight loss goals,
some days it's about the things i'm trying to mend,
i'm not sure but all i know,
is i just want this to end.

does it sound corny?

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  • Le Fille Morte
    October 24, 2008

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    completely true
    completely real
    it all makes sense
    and you say it so well.
    a very well done.
    honestly.


  • Blooming Poet
    October 15, 2008

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    Welcome To AP

    First of all let me tell you that you are not alone. So many girls in this world today especially teens struggle with a negative body image. It's healthy to write it out, so thats good. One piece of advice capitlize your I's


  • MysticalRayne
    October 13, 2008

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    This is a wonderful piece - rawly written about a struggle that is not easy at all - thank you for sharing and your rhyme flows smoothly