i see you tied up on my bed.
shoulders twitching and face bright red.
that almost-convincing struggle really turns my crank.
i smell how wet your pussy is.
is there anything more exciting than this?
but I'm going to make you suffer, let's be frank.
I'm going to punish you for your sins
by pinching your nipples with clothespins
then giving your naked bottom a good SPANK!!!
the tawse, the cat-o-nine tails
the riding crops, the flails
are all great tools for turning your cheeks pink.
while you writhe there in your fetters
your pussy getting ever wetter.
until you're just so horny, you cant even think
you beg for me to put it in
its just about time to begin
but still i tease you 'til you're at the brink
then i mount your helpless form
and give it to you hard and warm
and bite you on the shoulder, oh so fine
thats when the orgasm hits you
and in the throes of fits, you
scream over and over and over how you're mine
at last when you're untied
and cuddling at my side
you see just how our love is so divine.
Author notes
this is not the only S/M poem ive written. go to my page to find the other 2
Written January 26th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- ~Dominance and Submission and the Lifestyle~Adult Catagory by Deviantpoetess.
300 points, ended April 16, 2004, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Oh this is so good my kind of poetry I shall be going on to read more in your Erotic catagory, Thank you for sharing this piece if art you have done a wonderful job here.
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AMAZING a brilliant write, there is something sizzling hot about this! xx Cheryl
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*Wistels* I love this poem as well, there is something apealing, and terribly erotic about bondage... I apluad this poem, its very good
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What a nice poem to be reading in the wee hours of the morning .Good stuff . Nice that you ended it with soft cuddles
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2nd place 
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Well done on silver babe..didnt think mine was wrothy of the place I got but hey..i wasnt the judge:S maybe we should work together for our own contest n see wot folks come up wiv???.....catch ya soon hun..xxxxxx
katt
xxx
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I like this.... its a little s&m but it also has passion (more twords the end)
I am looking forword to reading your other s&m writes!
bravo! and good luck in the contest
Kayla Dawn -
Hehehehehe............(wide grin), I think I enjoyed this a little too much. I really enjoyed the rhyme scheme that you incorporated through out the write. I liked seeing the bond that was there between the two of you as well, through all the playtime it is nice to see the enjoyment of ones partner as they are piqued. Great write I enjoyed reading through this one. Take care.
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excellent entry
Ohhh My now this is what I was talking about..The spanking the teasing, the being naughty feeling so good.I love the rhyme scheme as well...Awesome write my friend ..Good luck in the contest
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Good poem once again....although in parts i ended up laughing, not getting horny!!! Hmmm......Anyway, i love the rhyme scheme, it's brilliant, and doesn't sound too forced at all. There's more imagery in this one, not a lot of description, but imagery.....which is good. So, great poem, and brilliant structure. XXXX
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Ouch definately comes to mind...but I do like the idea of being teased until I couldn't take any more at all. Do you ever have the rolls switched? hm... Great write here. It's nice and toasty in here!
Foxy -
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I'm going to punish you for your sins
by pinching your nipples with clothespins OUCH -
Oh dear...poor masochist! lol... this piece had me in a rush, and before having read this piece I thought I was the most sadistic person on earth! 
It's mainly because of my former fiance, a sadomasochist goth, that I became attracted to stuff like this... your piece is so edgy, raw... yet pleasant... and I very well would've 'came' if not for the fact that I have been celibate for nearly a year now (since last Valentine's Day), usually go for long periods of time without even being touched and can suppress the urges very well--and plus I am at work, another excuse 
But one thing is for certain...this made me very hot... (runs out into the cold to 'cool off')
Many blessings,
Raven Aurora
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Dear mercy ... fans herself Wow, you've got one lucky girlfriend/slavegirl there .. very cute form, given another meaning from the words .. sounds almost like a taunt when read aloud .. very nice!
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i guess i'm a top because i kinda like that illusion of power, and playing the bad guy ( I sometimes dress up as the phantom of the opera when i dominate). mostly though i like making my partner come HARD, so i like to tease until it reaches a boiling point, and then its time to please.
Edited on Jan 28, 7:11 p.m. because ''. -
it's a little odd reading the top's view... just because me mind hates making the decisions... I can tell that this is well written and such, but my mind is having the weirdest time comprehending.
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See what happens, dear? You're such a trouble maker.
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oh dam im on a break during classes and im just browsing the site before my next class and i stumbled upon your poem what can i say except i have a class now and i have a huge smile on mt face
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Honey!
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this sounds like a reply of the other night.. ANYWAYS i loved it. this hit a personal memorie... Lmao... but thank you for replaying it. this poem was amazing... thank you so so so much for entering. you did a fantastic job, loved the imagery.. can i have her when your done lol?
Phoenix
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