This love is not so easy
This love happens not so easily
forget the hurts of yesterday
let me heal your wounds today
All these years where have my life been
why haven't I met my life before
why haven't I...
Everything about you gives me peace
Every word from you is another hope
Every smile from you is like heaven
This beautiful feeling is so new
like a sunrise to a morning
Please tell me what you think
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wow..
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awwww !
thats a beautiful write dear
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This is really a great poem
at the first stanza it gives the base of the poem
second stanza just rocks
and the third stanza makes it one of the most powerful love poem
in my opinion i havent read a love poem like this one for long
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eheh thankuu Rehan for your beautiful words
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Loved it... sorry... dont have more applauses -
Lovely- I like this a lot!
It is nice to read a poem with a bit of hardship -
"This love is not so easy
This love happens not so easily"
Nice write!
Id X
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Awesome :)
I'm in love with someone and I can understand how it feels.It's not easy to win the love and trust of someone.It takes a lot of patience,understanding and all those sort of things.lolz.Every verse is simply beautiful.I love the second verse and how we feel like we're meeting our life again.The fact of the matter is when you're in love everything,every little aspect of the other person gives you this feeling of peace and happiness.It's like everything in the world is all bright and beautiful and hopeful and death and decay,sorrow and malice dont even exist anymore.But love isnt easy.It never has been and never will be.Great read!
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hey hope you doing well my dear friend.
All these years where have my life been
why haven't I met my life before
why haven't I... this is very interesting line. what did you meant by it? usually we live life and we loose it, also we save, see life and take life. its unique in its own prospective that i we meet our life that it took a part of our life to realize???
i like your last stanza, finding serene serenity and iis my fav para. i will re read this write when its complete. i be eagerly waiting.. remind me when you finish it. it reads very interesting my dear.
u take care and hope to see more
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why haven't I met my life before
why haven't I...
"Life" here I prefer to a "special person" finding this special someone is more like finding life.Well the poem is complete hehe its all thanks for coming up here to read.I appreciate it abuyi
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well the first two lines are to similar. They disrupt the flow. The rest of the poem seems to be written well enough tho. All in all it is a decent write. Good job
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Well yeaha first two lines sounds similar but both have different meanings..this love is not so easy means love is not easy...
and this love happens not so easily means..it dosn't happen that easily..thanks for your quick comment
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