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Misfortune

Pained.
Fallen.
Stained.

Pale with no remorse.

Hated.
Haunted.

Misfortune takes its course.

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Lucky 13. It's a pleasure to enter your contest.

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  • redrumdog31
    October 13, 2008

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    'Misfortune- a fortune that never misses' thats what your poem reminds me


    • XChrisUnknownX
      October 14, 2008
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      Interesting reminder. Hopefully all your fortune will be a misfortune. Thanks for you comment!


  • Lady Michaella
    October 13, 2008

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    This poem is very haunting indeed. I am really glad it rhymes. I wish you could have done more with it, but this is excellent, and a truly dark write. Thanks for entering!!
    -RoseDaughter-


    • XChrisUnknownX
      October 13, 2008
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      Thanks. I did my best based upon my own mind and the rules of the contest. =] I appreciate the prompt, I really enjoyed writing this.


  • Angierie
    October 13, 2008
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    I love the dark writes

    Amazing.. as always

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