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the world is hurting,
What could we do?
what would you do,
If i built a city on you?
how could we let this happen?
this concretes heavy,
the world is collapsin.
i say this with passion,
call the actors
tell them stop all that actin.
this aint time to entertain,
It's time for action.


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  • Hey cool! another tree hugger I'm kidding but this is awesome. I was talking to my friend about religions...is there a religion that worships the earth? if there is i bet this would be framed for their churches....I'd do it.


  • BrokenWings...Fly
    November 14, 2008
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    "the world is hurting.."

    great write =D
    I love the msg <3 Its time for action! XD

    keep it up, ne? <3

    -Rayne.


  • Beautyfull-x-Angel
    October 28, 2008
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    amazin keep it up


  • Erica Carnea
    October 16, 2008

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    ' its time for action '
    very powerfull, love the way the poem is almos ordering you what to do its great
    xx