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Peace Will Be Yours

~*~

Unanswered questions
inability to find reason
no answers to the why's
feeling heavy with pain.

As you reach far into
the window of your mind
your heart will feel void
your sorrow will remain.

In time you'll be able
to pick up the pieces
that was so out of control
and mend your wounds.

A lifetime of memories
brings comforting warmth
and unbending loyalty
will free you from grief.

~*~

A contest entry

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  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 28, 2008

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    I do think that will offer comfort it is hard to get through times when you have lost the one that you love no matter how they have passed thanks for sharing be well


  • Edited
    October 17, 2008
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    i like this one just sorta hits me cant honestly say butit does.
    nice one, a pleasure indeed.


    • PrincessOfFire
      October 17, 2008
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      This was written to give comfort to a person Whose sister died by committing suicide. I was trying to give her some comfort! Hope that helps! Rose


  • Kuranya gold member
    October 15, 2008

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    She will always be in my heart and we have shared 36 years together with so many wonderful memories I will never forget. Thank you for writing something so beautiful for my family. Best to you in the contest


  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 13, 2008

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    So beautiful and breath taking...a wonderful trip though grief into recovery and inspiration for the future...beautiful...
    thank you so much for the support...
    Love,
    mystic

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