Get out of my face!
I feel neglected,
Misused,
Mistreated.
You excluded me.
You showed me you never really cared.
You suck.
Get out of my face!
Every minute that passes by is another minute you forget
That I’m here
In this corner,
Sobbing pitifully,
In that way that you hate so much.
So I just sob harder
You wouldn’t care if I stabbed myself
Lying in this corner here
Every time you’re close
I just want to grab you
And slap you hard
Just like you did to me.
Ill slap you in your pretty face,
Till the red marks start to turn black and blue.
I can see through you
Your clear, and the mysteries that I will find
Show you being beaten and mistreated.
By family, by friends
So you pass on your pain
You pass them on to me
And now you will pay!
A contest entry
- Almost Anything by poets whisper.
550 points, ended November 11, 2008, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Angry Anyone?? by A-Daisy-Among-Roses.
900 points, ended December 6, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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The title.... is immature. NEVER use IM speak in a poem and NEVER in the title. The " You Suck" reminds me of a toddler sticking out their tounge at someone who didn't let them have their seventh candy. Their are bits and pieces that you portray your emotion strongly but for the most part your concept is lost.
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I changed it
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You've lost me from the title
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Get a life!! tis poem should be about you!!
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I rather not have a poem of this merit written for me.
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