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thinking again

from the beginnining.
my head was spinning.
I must have been imprinted,
with decisions of sinning.
In a game such as life,
It's hard to be winning.
So its hard to be willing.
To go on fulfilling.
This so called fate im given.
I can't take it,
My mind is driven.
From this life i'm livin'
Excuse my sins,
Lord may i be forgiven?
I think i need a new start.
No more hustlelin,
I'll take up a new art.
I'll use my brain,
I'll get smart.
not talking about the movie.
I'm saying real talk,
about yours truely.
i'll be more polite,
say thank you & excuse me.

Please tell me what you think

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  • WuzGood
    July 4
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    not bad, good rhyming, sound almost like lyrics. keep it up!


  • Beautyfull-x-Angel
    October 28, 2008
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    i love this, i think your a good person the way you are no need to change.


  • Erica Carnea
    October 16, 2008
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    love this
    darkest love
    erica
    xx