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colors captivate
as my nose runs from pollen
autumn has me bound




Words: K.Botka
10/13/08

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I'm greatly allergic to my two favorite seasons!

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  • azure85 gold member
    October 26, 2008

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    colors captivate
    as my nose runs from pollen
    autumn has me bound

    Oh, the downside of autumn! But L1 is so true, it is a beautiful time of year, I enjoyed your L3 very much. Thank you so much.


  • DogFish silver member
    October 13, 2008
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    ...there's always a pebble in our shoe!