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The look out

Here I am
looking out upon the beauty
that is nature.

The crystal clear water
reflects the serenity that I feel.

I hear the birds happily chirping,
see fish joyfully jumping, and feel a gentle
flowing breeze across my face.  Peace fills me.

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credit Mark Griffin

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    October 13, 2008
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    What a beautifully serene picture you portray! Lovely!


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    October 13, 2008
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    Peace rocks.


  • Confusedboy
    October 13, 2008

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    Lovely, nothing offers the punck, delightfull peace as the beauty of scenery, quietness of woods, animals, or birds having fun in their natural environment.


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    October 13, 2008
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    Now this seems like the BEST place to be. Delightful. ~Pamela


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    October 13, 2008

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    This is beautiful and such
    lovely imagery you wrote this
    with. It's always a wonderful
    feeling to just go out and be
    alone enjoying all of nature.
    Good luck to you here my friend!




    Jeremy0826

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